| Description | Goal Tracker:
Mia: "Best to leave Mia nad her parent's alone for now" typo for the word 'and'
Roxxy: "Roxxy is definitely warming up to me, I should go talk to her." The comma should either be a semi-colon or a period. These are two complete sentences and they can't be combined with a comma.
Roxxy: "The girls have invited me to the beach on weekends, but I can't go empty-handed" missing 'the' before the word weekends
Roxxy: "That was wild. and hot." The period should be removed after the word wild.
Art Class Storyline:
The narrative while painting the principal and Anna in costume: "I couldn't decide rather to laugh or crap my pants in terror..." Instead of the word rather, it should say 'whether.'
Roxxy storyline (Rain Scene):
"The storm came on fast! We grabbed our stuff and ran as quick as we could! ..." It should say as 'quickly' as we could since it's an adverb.
"...And it was quite dashing, if I do say so myself." It should say 'I' and not it.
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