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IDCategoryLast Update
0001554Bug Report2019-07-11 17:06
ReporterKennyannydenny 
SeveritytextReproducibilityalways
Status newResolutionopen
Summary0001554: My collection of discovered typos and spelling errors
DescriptionSo this is all in 16.1, I can't verify if these have already been changed yet.

Debbie kitchen fuck:
"Heh, I love it when you say things like that" > needs a full stop at the end
"Oh, yes!." > needs the full stop at the end removed

Sex on the couch:
"Debbie, I'm can't hold it." > "I can't"
I noticed "Baby" is constantly written with a capital B, whilst sweetie is written with a small S. I think the "Baby" words need a small B too.

Showering with Debbie:
"I love showering with you, Debbie" > needs a full stop at the end

Debbie giving the MC a blowjob whilst sleeping:
"( ... Maybe I could just take a peak... )" > "peak" should be "peek"

Hope I can update this report later with more, but we'll see.
Platform/OSWindows
Version0.16

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Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-04-26 12:32

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Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-04-26 12:33

reporter   ~0002033

See also: https://bugs.kompasproductions.com/view.php?id=1553
Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-05-03 08:43

reporter   ~0002306

I think these are also in the 0.18 release, I saw at least some of them when going through the scenes again.
BawdyBen

BawdyBen

2019-05-04 00:29

reporter   ~0002365

Another typo during the first scene in the car (version 18.1), where Debbie says:

"I'm not sure If I should be worried of flattered?"

"If" needs to be lower-case "if" instead, and it should be "or flattered" not "of flattered."
Also, not sure if the sentence should end in a question mark, but the previous two are definitely in error.
Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-05-08 20:08

reporter   ~0002492

I checked these typos and they're still there in 0.18.2. Here are some more:

Diane and Debbie scene outside:
"... Cause you are really over selling it!" > if you use cause instead of because it should have an apostrophe in front of it. Also, "overselling" is one word afaik, so no space in between.

Once inside Debbie says:
"It's a big cold out here..." > I think you ment bit instead of big

Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-05-08 20:25

reporter   ~0002494

Debbie and the MC inside the car together:
"Heh, I dunno... I would probably be mortified if we got caught!." > remove the full stop at the end

After the blowjob in the car:
"Hehe, well I'm glad you enjoy it, [name of user]. Cause I love sucking your cock!" > again, using cause instead of because requires a apostrophe before the word, so 'cause

Sex in MC's bed:
Same as with the couch scene here, sweetie is written with a small S but Baby is written with a capital b and Sweetheart with a capital S. The last two should both be lower case. There are two cases of "Sweetheart" in the scene by the way.

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Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-05-08 20:38

reporter   ~0002496

Sex with Debbie in her bed:
When breastfeeding, the MC says: "Can I kiss your breasts?." > remove the full stop at the end

When cumming outside after the cowgirl position Debbie says:
"It's everywhere!." > remove the full stop at the end

Sex in the basement:
"Hehe, Yeah. That's definitely a perk!" > Yeah should be lower case, *not* with a capital Y

Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-05-08 21:12

reporter   ~0002501

When giving Pussywillow a hug:
"Who's a good Kitty?!" > kitty should be lower case, *not* a capital K

When jerking off to Debbie in your bed:
"Well Hello there..." > hello should be lower case, *not* a capital H

When talking with Diane at the barn:
The option "You call Veronica yet?" > change call to called

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Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-05-08 22:05

reporter   ~0002502

While on the phone looking at a hint of Ms. Bissette:
"I need to a book to help me with my assignment on food." > add "find", or "get" or "obtain", like "I need to find a book"

When trying to take Debbie's panties when you don't need them:
"( I have no use for them right now ) > add a full stop after now

During the fun with Judith the MC says:
"We could do like last time, I guess?" > Incorrect sentence. Maybe add "the same" and change "like" to "as", so "We could do the same as last time, I guess?" Keeping it like this is not correct

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Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-05-09 08:49

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Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-05-09 08:49

reporter   ~0002509

Fucking with Jenny in the shower:
"Yeah, I'm getting close too" > needs interpunction, either a full stop or an exclamation mark

Mrs. Johnson threesome:
"It's okay, Honey. I love the feeling of cum dripping out of my..." > Honey should be written lower case, *not* with a capital H. She calls Erik pumpkin and that is written lower case. So not sure why Honey is written with a capital

^Same case in the solo Mrs. Johnson scene

Sex with Mia, vaginally:
"No, I've had orgasm before...." > "orgasm" is not correct in this sentence. it should be "an orgasm" or "orgasms".

Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-05-09 11:09

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Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-05-09 11:09

reporter   ~0002512

Having sex with Roz:
"That's it Kid, nice and deep." > Kid should be lower case, *not* a capital K. I've seen two instances of this in the same scene.

Sex with Aqua:
"Come Back sssoon, Human." > Human should be lower case, *not* a capital H.
"Ooohh!." > remove the full stop at the end
"and deep!" > either add ... at the start, or change the A to a capital A instead of lower case

Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-05-09 11:21

reporter   ~0002513

Kissing with Ms. Bisette in the French classroom:
"Tres Bien, [player name]..." > Tres Bien should be Très bien, so lower case B and the accent grave on the E.
"Mmm, Ta bouche est magique!" > the T from ta should be a lower case, *not* a capital T

Sex in Ms. Bisette's office:
"Don't be shy kiss them." > this needs a comma between shy and kiss
"Oh, Oui!" > the O from Oui should be lower case, not a capital letter

Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-05-09 11:35

reporter   ~0002514

Sex in Ms. Bisette's office:
"Tres Bien, mon bel homme!" > Same like the scene in the classroom. "Tres Bien" should be "Très bien", so lower case B and the accent grave on the E.

The scene with the talent show and the blowjob from Miss DeWitt:
"You got this, Bro!" > Bro should be lower case, *not* a capital B

Sex with Ms. DeWitt in her office:
"That's it, Baby! I'm gonna cum all over that big dick!" > Baby should be lower case, not a capital B
"Heh, Mmm..." > Mmm should be lower case, not a capital M

Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-05-09 13:49

reporter   ~0002515

Drawing Judith in art class:
"Yeah, is that alright." > change the full stop to a question mark
"... And here's our little Cutie Pie, just in time!" > Cutie pie should be written lower case, instead of capitals
"It sure is, Dear." > Miss Ross says it all the time during the scene, Dear with a capital D, this should be lower case
On one occasion Mia says Oki Doki, or something along those lines, but the doki part is also with a capital D, which should be a lower case. I do not have a screen of that though, accidently clicked past it.

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Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-05-09 14:14

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Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-05-09 14:14

reporter   ~0002517

First scene with Ms. Okita in her office:
"I noticed an anomoly." > It's anomaly, not anomoly :)
"It exceeds the norm of average Homo Sapien's." > change to Homo Sapiens or Homo Sapiens', not Sapien's. That's incorrect

The belt scene with Ms. Okita:
"I'm afriad curiousity got the better of me..." > change afriad to afraid

Third scene in her office, where Okita wants a semen sample:
"*sigh* I was born that way, Dummy." > Dummy should be written with a lower case, *not* a capital D
"Hmm, you think it's because of I have an overactive sex drive?" > remove "of"

Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-07-11 13:58

reporter   ~0002901

When getting the girlfriend experience from Jenny:
"Oh, this is a another good episode!" > remove a between "is" and "another"

Talking with Mrs. Johnson when she stands in the hallway in Erik's house:
"...And my boobs are not like the used to..." > change the to they
"Well, I try to use the Gym as often as I can..." > gym should be lower case, and use the game? I'd suggest saying: "Well, I try to go to the gym as often as I can..."

When looking at the newspaper in Mia's mailbox outside her house:
"The thief is still out on the loose? You would've thought they would've cuaght him by now." > Remove out, as in: "The thief is still on the loose?"

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Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-07-11 16:00

reporter   ~0002911

Exiting to the main menu:
"This will lose unsaved progress." > This sentence is not correctly English. it should either be "This will cause you to lose unsaved progress", or better yet "You will lose any unsaved progress."

Ordering a veggie pizza from Tony:
"Yeah well, it's a good thing I married you and not your mother then, aint it?" > change aint to ain't

Second+ time having being in the locker with Roxxy:
"You realize what would happen? If we got caught having sex on school grounds?!" > I'd suggest removing the first question mark and just making this a full sentence, a small bell goes off in my head everytime I read this sentence, not sure why. Is it correct like it is currently? Maybe it needs a comma instead of a question mark if you want to create a pause in the sentence.

Yerking off on the couch after unlocking the porn channel on the TV:
"I guess, I'd better go and get cleaned up." > remove the comma

Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-07-11 16:12

reporter   ~0002912

If a converation with Clyde near the shed, after saying "nevermind":
"Psh, hell yeah, Brother!" > brother should be a lower case B

Speaking with Missy and Becca at the Basketball Court:
The top option needs a full stop like other conversation options in the game (even things of one word have a full stop at the end, see for example a daytime conversation with Debbie).

Speaking with Dexter at the Basketball Court:
The middle option needs a full stop at the end.

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Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-07-11 16:13

reporter   ~0002913

2 things about the comment above.

With "if" in the first sentence I ment "In", and Dexter's option should have a question mark, not a full stop.
Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-07-11 16:42

reporter   ~0002914

Speaking with Crystal:
The second conversation option needs a quest mark at the end, the last one needs a full stop.

After saying "See ya!" to Cedric at the gym:
"Don't go skipping leg day now, Heh!" > heh should be with a lower case H

When talking with Josephine:
Option two and three need a full stop at the end. I guess option to could also go without but in other conversations the "Nothing." option always has a full stop. So for continuity it should also be added here.

When speaking with Kim:
Option two and three need a full stop at the end.

Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-07-11 16:51

reporter   ~0002916

Item description of the DarthMoan in the inventory:
"A double bladed dildo, for double the fun!." > remove the full stop at the end

Item description of The Breeder Guide (Lactation and Me) in the inventory:
"A very "in-depth" guide on how to breed like a Bull!" > bull should be lower case

item description of the Obituary Records:
"The obituary records that contains the name of the boatsmith." > Change contains to contain. Records is plural, and in this case it's no proper noun so the verb should be singular.

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Kennyannydenny

Kennyannydenny

2019-07-11 17:06

reporter   ~0002919

Item description of the Huge stack of Magazines in the inventory:
"A huge stacks of magazines. Those porno mags sure look interesting..." > change stacks to stack, it should be singular here

When talking to Daisy:
The third option needs a full stop at the end

When talking with Diane in the barn:
The fourth option needs a full stop

When talking to Anna in the gym:
the second option needs a full stop

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